Dissertation correction

Project Desciption

Hi,

I have a  dissertation draft ready with me but it should be as per my supervisor’s comments and requirements. So I want to get it fixed/rewritten wherever required as per the professor’s comments.  I am attaching here my dissertation draft I wrote and the professor’s comments received on it. It should be updated according to the comments given. Let me know if you can do it comfortably.

• Divyasri-Dissertation.docx
• Professors-comments.docx